1984. Honey, I never made it © Bruce Goodman 30 October 2020

Granville had made his wife, Doreen, the most beautiful rocking chair. It had taken him months of secret working in the shed out the back. Doreen never knew what he was up to. She supposed he was simply messing about, and then one day he produced the rocking chair and said “I made this for you, Honey.” What a beautiful chair! Carved legs! A perfect, perfect rocking motion! Even the sweetest cushion on the seat! “What a clever husband I have!” declared Doreen. “Who would have believed?” But the truth was, Granville had started to make a rocking chair and things didn’t work out. It was a mess, so he had a rocking chair made. It certainly was a magnificent rocking chair, but he had merely pretended to have made it himself. “What a clever husband I have!” repeated Doreen. “Who would have believed?” She was over the moon. Sometime later, Granville was diagnosed with a terminal disease. He grew weaker by the day. He knew, as he reviewed his life, that entrance to eternity perhaps demanded sorrow for sins. He simply had to tell Doreen about the rocking chair. It was clear that the end was near. Granville still hadn’t confessed to Doreen. And then, with one gigantic effort he declared “Honey, I never made it”. Within seconds he was dead. Doreen always thought as she rocked her way through widowhood, that Granville’s final “Honey, I never made it” was some premonition that he had been refused entrance through the Pearly Gates. Contact Author Back to Still More Stories Index Next Story Previous Story